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Ouch¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Dang knocked it out of the park again! I really loved how mythic and ritualistic this felt from the very first paragraph. The slow realization that every voice around him sounded familiar was such a good detail, and the entire piece felt like stepping into an old punishment story that survived way too long.

Also ending the execution with the haiku callback was nasty in the best way. 🤌🏻

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