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Conor, this felt like finding an old forbidden manuscript buried under floorboards somewhere in New England and making the mistake of actually reading it.

The atmosphere in this is unreal. The slow escalation from “something feels off” to full cosmic nightmare was handled so well, and the old-world narration absolutely sold it. The line about the boys and girls “as unashamed as Adam and Eve before the Fall” genuinely chilled me because you can already feel the corruption underneath the innocence. Awesome work! 👏

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